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韩国慕色摄影:仿佛是昨天 [仿佛是昨天]

2019年11月22日 09:16

【走】【进】【2】【0】【3】【1】【年】【,】【听】【说】【呀】【,】【这】【一】【年】【小】【行】【星】【要】【给】【地】【球】【一】【次】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【拥】【抱】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【,】【闹】【得】【人】【心】【惶】【惶】【。】【有】【些】【人】【认】【为】【科】【学】【足】【以】【匹】【敌】【小】【行】【星】【,】【有】【些】【人】【则】【认】【为】【世】【界】【末】【日】【来】【了】【,】【有】【些】【人】【对】【这】【个】【惊】【大】【消】【息】【不】【以】【为】【然】【,】【在】【他】【们】【心】【里】【也】【许】【是】【小】【题】【大】【做】【,】【大】【惊】【小】【怪】【而】【已】【,】【我】【和】【我】【的】【团】【队】【也】【属】【于】【这】【一】【类】【,】【人】【们】【都】【说】【我】【们】【无】【可】【救】【药】【,】【直】【到】【一】【个】【凉】【爽】【的】【夜】【晚】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】【&】【h】【e】【l】【l】【i】【p】【;】

【谢】【云】【飞】【正】【若】【有】【所】【思】【的】【看】【着】【向】【北】【,】【像】【是】【看】【了】【一】【场】【马】【戏】【表】【演】【,】【却】【为】【该】【不】【该】【鼓】【掌】【而】【犹】【豫】【不】【决】【。】【裂】【缝】【见】【袭】【击】【向】【北】【不】【得】【手】【,】【便】【将】【目】【标】【转】【向】【了】【谢】【云】【飞】【,】【他】【丝】【毫】【不】【知】【下】【一】【刻】【将】【坠】【入】【深】【渊】【。】【仍】【站】【在】【原】【地】【不】【动】【,】【于】【是】【谢】【云】【飞】【脚】【下】【的】【地】【面】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【的】【裂】【开】【了】【,】【直】【直】【掉】【了】【下】【去】【,】【等】【等】【,】【他】【为】【什】【么】【会】【悬】【在】【半】【空】【中】【,】【定】【晴】【一】【看】【,】【原】【来】【是】【一】【根】【又】【黑】【又】【粗】【的】【绳】【子】【绑】【住】【了】【他】【,】【正】【在】【向】【上】【升】【。】【向】【北】【看】【的】【眼】【睛】【都】【直】【了】【就】【说】【谢】【云】【飞】【的】【黑】【夹】【皮】【怎】【么】【不】【见】【了】【,】【原】【来】【是】【用】【千】【亿】【个】【微】【米】【机】【器】【人】【组】【成】【<】【u】【>】【作】【文】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【w】【w】【w】【.】【z】【u】【o】【w】【e】【n】【8】【.】【c】【o】【m】【<】【/】【u】【>】【的】【,】【这】【些】【机】【器】【人】【可】【以】【组】【成】【任】【何】【形】【状】【,】【看】【来】【都】【使】【出】【了】【看】【家】【本】【领】【。】【谢】【云】【飞】【打】【算】【来】【个】【帅】【气】【登】【场】【,】【只】【可】【惜】【他】【的】【发】【型】【乱】【了】【。】韩国慕色摄影【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【喝】【牛】【奶】【,】【快】【去】【吃】【早】【餐】【,】【然】【后】【刷】【牙】【洗】【脸】【!】【”】【唉】【,】【我】【的】【妈】【妈】【又】【开】【始】【唠】【叨】【了】【,】【这】【样】【的】【唠】【叨】【已】【经】【1】【2】【年】【了】【,】【听】【得】【我】【都】【快】【要】【有】【离】【家】【出】【走】【的】【冲】【动】【了】【。】【不】【过】【,】【在】【唠】【叨】【中】【,】【我】【也】【渐】【渐】【感】【到】【了】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【星】【期】【六】【的】【早】【上】【,】【小】【鸟】【在】【窗】【前】【的】【树】【枝】【上】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【欢】【唱】【着】【,】【商】【量】【着】【哪】【儿】【的】【虫】【子】【肥】【美】【。】【而】【此】【时】【我】【正】【梦】【见】【美】【味】【的】【“】【开】【封】【菜】【”】【K】【F】【C】【,】【巨】【大】【的】【汉】【堡】【包】【和】【香】【嫩】【的】【鸡】【腿】【…】【…】【突】【然】【,】【一】【声】【惊】【雷】【,】【妈】【妈】【大】【吼】【一】【声】【:】【“】【快】【起】【床】【叠】【被】【子】【,】【都】【8】【点】【了】【,】【怎】【么】【还】【赖】【在】【床】【上】【?】【”】【结】【果】【,】【小】【鸟】【被】【吓】【飞】【了】【,】【周】【公】【为】【我】【做】【的】【美】【味】【汉】【堡】【包】【被】【“】【收】【”】【回】【去】【了】【。】【我】【皱】【着】【眉】【,】【非】【常】【不】【情】【愿】【地】【穿】【好】【衣】【服】【,】【极】【不】【耐】【烦】【地】【叠】【着】【被】【子】【,】【然】【后】【慢】【吞】【吞】【地】【坐】【到】【餐】【桌】【旁】【。】【妈】【妈】【在】【厨】【房】【又】【喊】【了】【:】【“】【吃】【早】【餐】【、】【喝】【牛】【奶】【,】【然】【后】【刷】【牙】【洗】【脸】【准】【备】【上】【学】【!】【”】【“】【今】【天】【不】【用】【上】【学】【!】【”】【我】【抗】【议】【。】【妈】【妈】【总】【把】【我】【当】【什】【么】【都】【需】【要】【提】【醒】【的】【幼】【儿】【园】【的】【小】【娃】【娃】【,】【这】【些】【事】【情】【已】【经】【重】【复】【了】【那】【么】【多】【年】【,】【我】【知】【道】【什】【么】【时】【候】【做】【什】【么】【,】【何】【况】【我】【自】【己】【戴】【着】【表】【,】【自】【己】【可】【以】【管】【理】【时】【间】【呀】【!】【可】【是】【妈】【妈】【总】【要】【一】【而】【再】【,】【再】【而】【三】【地】【提】【醒】【我】【…】【…】【“】【早】【餐】【怎】【么】【吃】【得】【这】【么】【慢】【?】【可】【以】【边】【吃】【饭】【边】【听】【英】【语】【,】【一】【心】【二】【用】【这】【个】【可】【以】【有】【!】【…】【…】【洗】【完】【牛】【奶】【杯】【,】【赶】【紧】【做】【作】【业】【!】【”】【不】【等】【妈】【妈】【唠】【叨】【完】【,】【我】【郁】【闷】【地】【抓】【起】【书】【包】【冲】【进】【卧】【室】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【午】【吃】【过】【午】【饭】【,】【我】【正】【津】【津】【有】【味】【地】【看】【着】【K】【A】【K】【U】【动】【画】【电】【视】【,】【妈】【妈】【又】【对】【我】【喊】【起】【来】【:】【“】【还】【看】【?】【还】【看】【?】【都】【快】【成】【小】【四】【眼】【了】【!】【离】【电】【视】【那】【么】【近】【!】【”】【我】【往】【后】【挪】【了】【挪】【,】【妈】【妈】【又】【补】【充】【道】【:】【“】【下】【次】【再】【让】【我】【看】【见】【你】【离】【电】【视】【机】【那】【么】【近】【,】【下】【周】【玩】【电】【脑】【的】【时】【间】【—】【—】【取】【—】【—】【消】【—】【—】【”】【到】【了】【晚】【上】【吃】【饭】【,】【我】【狼】【吞】【虎】【咽】【地】【吃】【着】【美】【味】【的】【红】【烧】【鱼】【,】【妈】【妈】【又】【絮】【絮】【叨】【叨】【起】【来】【:】【“】【小】【心】【鱼】【刺】【卡】【着】【,】【吃】【饭】【要】【细】【嚼】【慢】【咽】【,】【有】【利】【消】【化】【!】【”】【我】【只】【好】【放】【慢】【吃】【饭】【的】【速】【度】【,】【细】【细】【地】【剔】【着】【鱼】【刺】【,】【细】【嚼】【着】【米】【饭】【。】【晚】【上】【快】【睡】【觉】【的】【时】【候】【,】【母】【亲】【的】【例】【行】【功】【课】【又】【开】【始】【了】【:】【“】【降】【温】【了】【,】【晚】【上】【记】【得】【盖】【好】【被】【子】【,】【别】【着】【凉】【了】【…】【…】【”】【妈】【妈】【的】【话】【我】【都】【快】【背】【下】【来】【了】【,】【我】【不】【耐】【烦】【地】【赶】【紧】【用】【被】【子】【盖】【住】【头】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【了】【初】【中】【,】【我】【住】【校】【了】【,】【终】【于】【不】【用】【再】【听】【妈】【妈】【每】【天】【的】【“】【唐】【僧】【念】【经】【”】【了】【。】【可】【是】【,】【如】【果】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【可】【能】【忘】【了】【每】【天】【早】【上】【和】【晚】【上】【要】【喝】【牛】【奶】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【可】【能】【不】【会】【坚】【持】【刷】【牙】【,】【就】【会】【像】【隔】【壁】【的】【晓】【东】【长】【了】【满】【口】【虫】【牙】【,】【疼】【得】【龇】【牙】【咧】【嘴】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【可】【能】【又】【忘】【了】【降】【温】【后】【添】【加】【衣】【服】【,】【会】【在】【教】【室】【里】【瑟】【瑟】【发】【抖】【…】【…】【如】【果】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【就】【会】【失】【去】【一】【种】【平】【实】【、】【温】【暖】【的】【幸】【福】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【周】【末】【回】【家】【时】【,】【我】【发】【现】【母】【亲】【很】【少】【唠】【叨】【了】【,】【便】【玩】【笑】【似】【的】【对】【她】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【最】【近】【怎】【么】【听】【不】【到】【你】【的】【唠】【叨】【声】【了】【?】【我】【还】【有】【点】【不】【习】【惯】【了】【。】【”】【妈】【妈】【笑】【着】【说】【:】【“】【我】【以】【后】【再】【也】【不】【会】【像】【个】【老】【太】【太】【一】【样】【唠】【叨】【你】【了】【,】【你】【长】【大】【了】【,】【不】【论】【是】【学】【习】【还】【是】【生】【活】【上】【已】【经】【养】【成】【了】【好】【习】【惯】【,】【现】【在】【不】【用】【我】【唠】【叨】【,】【你】【也】【一】【样】【能】【做】【得】【很】【好】【,】【你】【老】【妈】【我】【也】【要】【歇】【歇】【喽】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【怎】【么】【,】【住】【校】【的】【日】【子】【听】【不】【到】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【我】【心】【里】【有】【时】【会】【感】【到】【空】【虚】【,】【总】【觉】【得】【生】【活】【少】【了】【点】【什】【么】【。】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【才】【发】【现】【:】【原】【来】【,】【在】【母】【亲】【的】【唠】【叨】【声】【中】【,】【我】【一】【直】【幸】【福】【着】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【冯】【梅】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【开】【篇】【极】【力】【地】【铺】【排】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【,】【以】【造】【成】【一】【种】【气】【势】【,】【把】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【写】【到】【了】【极】【致】【。】【然】【而】【作】【者】【又】【没】【有】【停】【留】【在】【只】【写】【唠】【叨】【上】【,】【而】【是】【以】【“】【唠】【叨】【”】【形】【成】【了】【一】【种】【“】【爱】【”】【,】【最】【后】【表】【明】【没】【有】【这】【种】【唠】【叨】【(】【爱】【)】【觉】【得】【空】【虚】【,】【体】【验】【唠】【叨】【就】【是】【体】【验】【幸】【福】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【叙】【述】【妈】【妈】【的】【唠】【叨】【时】【,】【作】【者】【很】【少】【表】【明】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【表】【现】【自】【己】【的】【情】【感】【,】【但】【是】【在】【文】【字】【背】【后】【,】【我】【们】【都】【能】【体】【会】【到】【唠】【叨】【实】【际】【上】【是】【一】【种】【爱】【,】【是】【一】【种】【深】【深】【的】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【实】【在】【我】【们】【写】【作】【文】【时】【,】【经】【常】【会】【出】【现】【作】【者】【站】【出】【来】【表】【达】【观】【点】【的】【情】【况】【,】【其】【实】【,】【读】【者】【会】【在】【阅】【读】【中】【体】【会】【作】【者】【的】【爱】【、】【憎】【等】【情】【感】【和】【观】【点】【,】【如】【果】【作】【者】【自】【己】【站】【出】【来】【说】【,】【那】【么】【读】【后】【就】【没】【有】【回】【味】【的】【余】【地】【了】【。】【本】【文】【作】【者】【则】【与】【众】【不】【同】【,】【这】【正】【是】【此】【文】【成】【功】【之】【处】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【言】【成】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【风】【,】【是】【生】【活】【中】【再】【普】【通】【不】【过】【的】【了】【。】【冬】【天】【时】【,】【风】【几】【乎】【天】【天】【光】【顾】【,】【伴】【我】【上】【学】【,】【跟】【我】【回】【家】【,】【我】【们】【像】【形】【影】【不】【离】【的】【好】【友】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【风】【,】【不】【可】【捉】【摸】【,】【它】【来】【无】【影】【,】【去】【无】【踪】【,】【看】【不】【见】【,】【摸】【不】【到】【,】【可】【当】【它】【迎】【面】【而】【来】【,】【送】【来】【阵】【阵】【凉】【意】【的】【时】【候】【,】【你】【就】【能】【闻】【到】【它】【的】【气】【息】【,】【淡】【而】【清】【,】【似】【有】【似】【无】【,】【像】【是】【远】【处】【高】【楼】【上】【渺】【茫】【的】【声】【音】【,】【又】【像】【是】【几】【十】【里】【内】【的】【琴】【声】【。】【走】【在】【路】【上】【的】【时】【候】【,】【这】【气】【息】【就】【传】【来】【了】【,】【那】【朦】【胧】【的】【美】【感】【,】【让】【你】【在】【这】【境】【界】【中】【流】【连】【忘】【返】【。】【可】【当】【我】【仔】【细】【找】【寻】【它】【时】【,】【它】【却】【又】【和】【我】【捉】【起】【迷】【藏】【,】【调】【皮】【地】【跑】【开】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【风】【啊】【风】【,】【让】【我】【怎】【么】【触】【摸】【到】【它】【的】【气】【息】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【可】【爱】【的】【风】【儿】【又】【是】【多】【变】【的】【。】【 】【“】【吹】【面】【不】【寒】【杨】【柳】【风】【”】【,】【春】【天】【时】【,】【这】【风】【儿】【时】【常】【爱】【抚】【着】【你】【,】【拥】【着】【你】【,】【抱】【着】【你】【,】【是】【那】【么】【温】【柔】【可】【人】【,】【有】【时】【它】【还】【含】【羞】【地】【看】【着】【你】【,】【像】【脉】【脉】【含】【情】【的】【少】【女】【;】【到】【夏】【天】【,】【这】【风】【就】【耍】【起】【了】【小】【性】【子】【,】【调】【皮】【起】【来】【,】【有】【时】【候】【甚】【至】【搅】【得】【天】【昏】【地】【暗】【,】【但】【它】【携】【来】【的】【瓢】【泼】【大】【雨】【,】【却】【洗】【尽】【了】【人】【间】【污】【浊】【,】【带】【来】【了】【一】【片】【清】【凉】【;】【秋】【天】【到】【了】【,】【它】【又】【变】【得】【那】【么】【香】【甜】【,】【空】【气】【中】【到】【处】【溢】【满】【了】【成】【熟】【的】【果】【香】【,】【沁】【人】【肺】【腑】【;】【冬】【天】【来】【了】【,】【它】【渐】【渐】【变】【得】【冷】【酷】【起】【来】【,】【温】【柔】【的】【轻】【风】【变】【成】【了】【小】【刀】【,】【人】【们】【似】【乎】【也】【不】【大】【喜】【欢】【它】【了】【。】【不】【过】【,】【当】【它】【吹】【落】【漫】【天】【雪】【花】【的】【时】【候】【,】【孩】【子】【们】【却】【个】【个】【着】【迷】【于】【它】【的】【独】【特】【魅】【力】【,】【瞧】【,】【孩】【子】【们】【在】【雪】【地】【里】【堆】【雪】【人】【,】【打】【雪】【仗】【,】【玩】【得】【多】【开】【心】【呀】【!】【那】【飘】【飘】【洒】【洒】【、】【飞】【飞】【扬】【扬】【的】【北】【国】【雪】【景】【是】【它】【在】【冬】【日】【的】【严】【寒】【里】【给】【人】【间】【送】【来】【的】【最】【美】【的】【礼】【物】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【多】【姿】【、】【美】【丽】【的】【风】【儿】【呀】【,】【我】【喜】【欢】【你】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【石】【光】【海】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】韩国慕色摄影【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【学】【阶】【段】【,】【我】【一】【直】【是】【个】【优】【秀】【的】【学】【生】【。】【上】【了】【初】【中】【以】【后】【,】【因】【为】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【喜】【欢】【上】【网】【,】【他】【总】【是】【在】【我】【面】【前】【吹】【嘘】【网】【络】【如】【何】【如】【何】【的】【神】【奇】【,】【如】【何】【如】【何】【的】【过】【瘾】【…】【…】【三】【番】【五】【次】【,】【我】【终】【于】【经】【不】【住】【他】【的】【引】【诱】【,】【跟】【着】【他】【第】【一】【次】【走】【进】【了】【网】【吧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【家】【里】【很】【富】【裕】【,】【他】【身】【上】【总】【是】【带】【着】【很】【多】【钱】【,】【随】【便】【伸】【手】【到】【口】【袋】【里】【一】【抓】【,】【就】【是】【数】【张】【百】【元】【大】【钞】【。】【开】【始】【上】【网】【的】【钱】【都】【是】【他】【帮】【我】【支】【付】【的】【,】【我】【没】【有】【出】【一】【分】【钱】【。】【他】【不】【但】【帮】【我】【出】【上】【网】【费】【,】【还】【手】【把】【手】【地】【教】【我】【如】【何】【操】【作】【,】【如】【何】【打】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【快】【,】【我】【也】【就】【真】【正】【地】【喜】【欢】【上】【了】【网】【络】【这】【虚】【拟】【的】【世】【界】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【初】【,】【受】【到】【同】【桌】【的】【影】【响】【,】【是】【上】【网】【玩】【游】【戏】【。】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【真】【是】【太】【多】【了】【,】【太】【好】【玩】【了】【。】【什】【么】【《】【魔】【兽】【世】【界】【》】【《】【穿】【越】【火】【线】【》】【《】【地】【下】【城】【与】【勇】【士】【》】【呀】【,】【什】【么】【《】【永】【恒】【之】【塔】【》】【《】【降】【龙】【之】【剑】【》】【《】【龙】【之】【谷】【》】【《】【梦】【幻】【西】【游】【》】【《】【千】【军】【破】【》】【《】【夺】【宝】【传】【世】【》】【呀】【…】【…】【太】【多】【了】【,】【真】【是】【玩】【不】【胜】【玩】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【只】【是】【玩】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【,】【后】【来】【我】【又】【迷】【上】【了】【网】【络】【聊】【天】【和】【浏】【览】【色】【情】【网】【页】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【始】【是】【同】【桌】【帮】【我】【付】【钱】【,】【几】【周】【后】【他】【就】【不】【愿】【意】【付】【了】【,】【得】【我】【自】【己】【掏】【了】【。】【上】【网】【费】【虽】【然】【不】【多】【,】【每】【小】【时】【1】【.】【5】【元】【,】【后】【来】【涨】【到】【了】【2】【元】【。】【但】【由】【于】【我】【玩】【得】【时】【间】【太】【久】【了】【,】【往】【往】【一】【玩】【入】【迷】【,】【就】【是】【整】【整】【一】【上】【午】【或】【一】【下】【午】【4】【个】【小】【时】【。】【再】【后】【来】【是】【整】【整】【一】【个】【白】【昼】【1】【2】【个】【小】【时】【,】【最】【后】【是】【整】【整】【一】【天】【2】【4】【个】【小】【时】【。】【虽】【然】【晚】【上】【从】【1】【2】【点】【钟】【开】【始】【,】【一】【直】【到】【第】【二】【天】【早】【上】【的】【8】【点】【可】【以】【用】【1】【0】【元】【包】【下】【,】【省】【去】【6】【元】【,】【但】【算】【下】【来】【,】【2】【4】【小】【时】【的】【上】【网】【费】【也】【要】【4】【2】【元】【,】【加】【上】【吃】【饭】【、】【喝】【水】【的】【费】【用】【(】【就】【在】【网】【吧】【里】【买】【)】【,】【一】【天】【最】【少】【要】【花】【去】【5】【0】【元】【。】【几】【天】【下】【来】【,】【我】【就】【把】【一】【个】【月】【的】【生】【活】【费】【花】【光】【了】【。】【于】【是】【就】【东】【借】【西】【挪】【,】【只】【要】【能】【弄】【到】【钱】【,】【就】【什】【么】【都】【不】【顾】【不】【管】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【疯】【狂】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【和】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【,】【连】【续】【上】【网】【了】【四】【天】【三】【夜】【,】【除】【了】【上】【厕】【所】【,】【就】【未】【离】【开】【过】【一】【下】【座】【位】【。】【渴】【了】【饿】【了】【就】【叫】【老】【板】【买】【水】【买】【饭】【,】【累】【了】【困】【了】【就】【趴】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【打】【个】【盹】【。】【至】【于】【上】【课】【、】【学】【习】【、】【外】【面】【的】【事】【情】【一】【概】【不】【知】【不】【管】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【家】【里】【是】【农】【村】【的】【,】【父】【母】【辛】【辛】【苦】【苦】【劳】【作】【一】【年】【的】【收】【入】【,】【只】【够】【维】【持】【一】【家】【人】【的】【基】【本】【生】【活】【,】【我】【上】【初】【中】【的】【费】【用】【虽】【然】【不】【多】【,】【但】【还】【是】【感】【到】【紧】【张】【。】【虽】【然】【免】【除】【了】【学】【杂】【费】【,】【但】【由】【于】【我】【住】【校】【,】【生】【活】【费】【还】【是】【不】【能】【少】【的】【。】【一】【个】【月】【3】【0】【0】【元】【左】【右】【的】【生】【活】【费】【,】【父】【母】【都】【掏】【得】【非】【常】【紧】【张】【,】【但】【他】【们】【还】【是】【乐】【于】【给】【他】【们】【的】【儿】【子】【我】【,】【还】【总】【是】【说】【,】【不】【够】【的】【话】【再】【回】【家】【拿】【。】【开】【始】【时】【我】【还】【会】【想】【想】【这】【些】【情】【况】【,】【想】【想】【父】【母】【的】【辛】【苦】【,】【但】【自】【从】【我】【迷】【上】【网】【络】【以】【后】【,】【就】【从】【不】【想】【这】【些】【了】【,】【没】【钱】【我】【就】【伸】【手】【向】【父】【母】【要】【。】【由】【于】【要】【得】【太】【多】【太】【频】【繁】【了】【,】【父】【母】【就】【追】【问】【我】【原】【因】【,】【我】【总】【是】【搪】【塞】【他】【们】【说】【学】【校】【里】【买】【这】【买】【那】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【由】【于】【请】【病】【假】【太】【多】【,】【逃】【课】【太】【多】【,】【成】【绩】【自】【然】【是】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【,】【从】【班】【上】【的】【前】【5】【名】【,】【一】【下】【落】【到】【了】【班】【上】【的】【最】【后】【5】【名】【。】【由】【于】【要】【钱】【要】【得】【太】【多】【太】【频】【繁】【,】【父】【母】【追】【问】【到】【了】【学】【校】【,】【老】【师】【和】【父】【母】【一】【碰】【头】【,】【我】【的】【“】【末】【日】【”】【也】【就】【到】【了】【。】【由】【于】【身】【体】【瘦】【掉】【了】【十】【多】【斤】【,】【加】【上】【父】【母】【的】【一】【顿】【猛】【揍】【,】【我】【昏】【了】【过】【去】【…】【…】【从】【医】【院】【出】【来】【后】【,】【泪】【水】【模】【糊】【了】【父】【母】【的】【双】【眼】【,】【也】【模】【糊】【了】【我】【的】【双】【眼】【…】【…】【学】【校】【勒】【令】【我】【停】【课】【一】【周】【,】【回】【家】【反】【省】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【着】【家】【里】【的】【空】【空】【荡】【荡】【,】【家】【徒】【四】【壁】【,】【看】【到】【父】【母】【的】【寒】【酸】【饭】【菜】【…】【…】【我】【猛】【烈】【地】【抽】【打】【我】【自】【己】【。】【漫】【长】【的】【一】【周】【,】【地】【狱】【般】【的】【一】【周】【反】【省】【,】【我】【脱】【胎】【换】【骨】【了】【。】【我】【再】【也】【不】【上】【网】【吧】【了】【,】【有】【百】【害】【而】【无】【益】【处】【,】【痛】【苦】【的】【代】【价】【让】【我】【终】【于】【醒】【悟】【到】【了】【这】【些】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【经】【历】【过】【死】【亡】【的】【人】【,】【更】【懂】【得】【生】【命】【的】【可】【贵】【。】【是】【啊】【,】【我】【对】【这】【话】【理】【解】【得】【更】【深】【了】【。】【一】【个】【人】【不】【能】【沉】【溺】【,】【更】【不】【能】【入】【迷】【,】【特】【别】【是】【对】【人】【生】【无】【益】【的】【事】【情】【,】【沉】【溺】【、】【入】【迷】【了】【是】【很】【危】【险】【、】【很】【可】【怕】【的】【。】【回】【想】【曾】【经】【的】【我】【,】【现】【在】【都】【仍】【然】【心】【有】【余】【悸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【生】【活】【即】【有】【作】【文】【,】【写】【真】【情】【、】【抒】【真】【意】【即】【是】【好】【作】【文】【。】【该】【文】【叙】【写】【自】【己】【的】【一】【次】【误】【入】【歧】【途】【的】【经】【历】【,】【向】【我】【们】【敞】【开】【了】【他】【的】【心】【扉】【,】【历】【数】【了】【他】【自】【身】【的】【不】【是】【,】【并】【没】【有】【去】【怨】【天】【尤】【人】【,】【而】【是】【深】【深】【地】【反】【省】【自】【己】【,】【并】【获】【得】【了】【对】【生】【活】【对】【生】【命】【的】【深】【刻】【认】【识】【和】【感】【悟】【,】【将】【坏】【事】【变】【成】【了】【好】【事】【。】【与】【其】【说】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【不】【如】【说】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【发】【出】【肺】【腑】【之】【言】【的】【忏】【悔】【录】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【:】【苦】【海】【无】【边】【,】【回】【头】【是】【岸】【。】【值】【得】【庆】【幸】【的】【是】【,】【小】【作】【者】【经】【历】【了】【一】【番】【波】【折】【以】【后】【,】【终】【于】【认】【识】【到】【自】【己】【行】【为】【的】【错】【误】【性】【,】【这】【是】【非】【常】【警】【醒】【人】【的】【,】【很】【值】【得】【那】【些】【仍】【然】【沉】【迷】【于】【网】【吧】【的】【同】【学】【参】【考】【、】【借】【鉴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【弗】【不】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【法】【点】【拨】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【俗】【话】【说】【,】【“】【从】【善】【如】【登】【,】【从】【恶】【如】【崩】【”】【。】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【如】【果】【被】【网】【瘾】【这】【个】【恶】【魔】【“】【附】【体】【”】【,】【可】【真】【如】【崩】【坍】【之】【山】【,】【决】【堤】【之】【水】【,】【其】【后】【果】【是】【很】【可】【怕】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【崩】【溃】【”】【的】【过】【程】【是】【迅】【猛】【的】【,】【但】【作】【者】【的】【叙】【述】【却】【是】【层】【层】【剥】【笋】【,】【逐】【步】【展】【开】【。】【先】【是】【迷】【恋】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【,】【接】【着】【又】【迷】【上】【了】【网】【络】【聊】【天】【,】【甚】【至】【于】【浏】【览】【色】【情】【网】【页】【,】【一】【步】【步】【走】【向】【深】【渊】【。】【就】【这】【样】【一】【个】【出】【身】【贫】【寒】【的】【孩】【子】【,】【学】【会】【了】【挥】【霍】【,】【学】【会】【了】【说】【谎】【,】【开】【始】【还】【有】【内】【疚】【,】【有】【怜】【悯】【心】【,】【有】【耻】【辱】【感】【,】【但】【在】【精】【神】【鸦】【片】【的】【腐】【蚀】【下】【,】【很】【快】【就】【麻】【木】【了】【。】【紧】【接】【着】【是】【身】【体】【的】【透】【支】【,】【学】【习】【成】【绩】【的】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【,】【如】【多】【米】【诺】【骨】【牌】【倒】【塌】【效】【应】【一】【般】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【采】【用】【先】【叙】【后】【议】【,】【叙】【写】【沉】【沦】【,】【文】【字】【细】【密】【,】【为】【的】【是】【告】【诫】【读】【者】【,】【要】【提】【高】【警】【惕】【。】【而】【叙】【写】【觉】【醒】【,】【文】【字】【疏】【简】【,】【“】【漫】【长】【的】【一】【周】【”】【,】【写】【起】【来】【不】【足】【百】【字】【,】【一】【个】【“】【地】【狱】【般】【的】【反】【省】【”】【,】【一】【个】【“】【脱】【胎】【换】【骨】【”】【,】【就】【足】【以】【传】【达】【出】【内】【心】【的】【悔】【恨】【。】【因】【为】【此】【时】【“】【我】【”】【的】【心】【情】【,】【读】【者】【完】【全】【能】【够】【想】【象】【出】【来】【,】【所】【以】【不】【必】【太】【多】【叙】【述】【。】【最】【后】【一】【段】【,】【发】【出】【议】【论】【,】【卒】【章】【显】【志】【,】【画】【龙】【点】【睛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【甫】【田】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

韩国慕色摄影:倾听大师经典国学读后感_倾听国学

【腊】【月】【初】【旬】【,】【天】【气】【转】【寒】【,】【家】【家】【户】【户】【都】【开】【始】【忙】【着】【制】【作】【香】【肠】【。】【先】【到】【集】【市】【上】【选】【购】【肥】【瘦】【适】【中】【的】【五】【花】【猪】【肉】【和】【猪】【的】【小】【肠】【。】【第】【一】【步】【要】【清】【洗】【猪】【小】【肠】【,】【这】【可】【是】【个】【非】【常】【艰】【巨】【的】【工】【程】【。】【要】【先】【把】【面】【粉】【放】【在】【小】【肠】【上】【反】【复】【揉】【搓】【,】【然】【后】【再】【把】【小】【肠】【翻】【过】【来】【用】【竹】【签】【轻】【轻】【的】【把】【上】【面】【的】【粘】【液】【刮】【干】【净】【,】【再】【用】【盐】【揉】【搓】【,】【最】【后】【用】【清】【水】【反】【复】【冲】【洗】【,】【直】【到】【小】【肠】【变】【成】【薄】【薄】【的】【透】【明】【状】【方】【可】【使】【用】【。】【第】【二】【步】【就】【要】【准】【备】【香】【肠】【所】【用】【的】【馅】【料】【。】【首】【先】【把】【新】【鲜】【的】【五】【花】【猪】【肉】【清】【洗】【干】【净】【,】【再】【切】【丁】【剁】【馅】【,】【然】【后】【把】【盐】【、】【姜】【、】【辣】【椒】【粉】【、】【味】【精】【、】【青】【葱】【、】【八】【角】【和】【炒】【熟】【的】【糯】【米】【以】【及】【鸡】【蛋】【等】【调】【料】【<】【u】【>】【作】【文】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【w】【w】【w】【.】【z】【u】【o】【w】【e】【n】【8】【.】【c】【o】【m】【<】【/】【u】【>】【放】【在】【肉】【末】【里】【一】【起】【搅】【拌】【均】【匀】【。】【剩】【下】【的】【就】【是】【大】【工】【程】【&】【m】【d】【a】【s】【h】【;】【&】【m】【d】【a】【s】【h】【;】【灌】【馅】【。】韩国慕色摄影【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【春】【日】【撒】【种】【虽】【胜】【好】【,】【但】【却】【炎】【夏】【美】【胜】【霜】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【风】【已】【报】【浓】【冬】【日】【,】【唯】【有】【它】【还】【放】【青】【光】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【峭】【壁】【虽】【陡】【难】【平】【直】【,】【青】【竹】【挺】【胸】【站】【山】【冈】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【朋】【友】【,】【这】【就】【是】【翠】【竹】【的】【真】【实】【写】【照】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【家】【的】【吊】【脚】【楼】【下】【有】【一】【片】【很】【大】【的】【竹】【林】【,】【每】【根】【竹】【子】【都】【很】【粗】【壮】【,】【最】【粗】【的】【直】【径】【大】【约】【有】【1】【0】【厘】【米】【左】【右】【,】【最】【高】【的】【有】【七】【八】【米】【呢】【!】【它】【们】【都】【依】【傍】【在】【一】【棵】【老】【槐】【树】【旁】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【晨】【,】【漫】【步】【竹】【林】【 】【,】【和】【风】【习】【习】【,】【竹】【林】【萧】【萧】【,】【林】【子】【里】【静】【极】【了】【,】【就】【连】【小】【鸟】【儿】【扑】【腾】【翅】【膀】【的】【声】【音】【也】【能】【听】【见】【。】【随】【着】【公】【鸡】【报】【晓】【,】【打】【破】【山】【村】【宁】【静】【,】【也】【划】【破】【了】【竹】【林】【的】【安】【静】【,】【林】【间】【顿】【时】【热】【闹】【起】【来】【,】【鸟】【儿】【亮】【开】【歌】【喉】【为】【我】【唱】【歌】【,】【虫】【儿】【们】【为】【我】【翩】【翩】【起】【舞】【,】【露】【珠】【与】【我】【交】【换】【眼】【神】【,】【刹】【那】【间】【,】【我】【便】【进】【入】【了】【一】【个】【美】【妙】【的】【音】【乐】【世】【界】【,】【那】【种】【优】【雅】【的】【旋】【律】【让】【我】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【久】【,】【乳】【白】【色】【的】【浓】【雾】【慢】【慢】【升】【腾】【开】【来】【,】【笼】【罩】【着】【大】【地】【,】【竹】【林】【也】【浸】【透】【其】【间】【,】【碧】【绿】【的】【竹】【叶】【挂】【满】【露】【珠】【,】【瞧】【!】【多】【美】【,】【它】【们】【集】【天】【地】【之】【精】【华】【,】【揽】【万】【物】【之】【胜】【景】【,】【偶】【尔】【,】【禁】【不】【住】【微】【风】【一】【吹】【,】【从】【叶】【尖】【滴】【落】【到】【你】【的】【脸】【上】【,】【痒】【酥】【酥】【,】【凉】【悠】【悠】【,】【渗】【入】【肌】【骨】【,】【浸】【透】【肺】【腑】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【云】【开】【雾】【散】【,】【阳】【光】【利】【剑】【一】【般】【穿】【过】【云】【层】【,】【挤】【过】【竹】【梢】【,】【钻】【进】【竹】【林】【里】【,】【使】【铺】【满】【竹】【叶】【的】【地】【面】【变】【得】【斑】【斑】【驳】【驳】【,】【印】【上】【各】【种】【美】【丽】【的】【图】【案】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【风】【是】【这】【里】【的】【主】【宰】【者】【,】【随】【着】【它】【一】【声】【高】【歌】【,】【“】【呼】【—】【—】【呼】【—】【—】【”】【竹】【儿】【们】【、】【小】【草】【们】【、】【大】【树】【们】【,】【一】【切】【的】【一】【切】【,】【禁】【不】【住】【跟】【着】【手】【舞】【足】【蹈】【起】【来】【,】【竹】【林】【发】【出】【天】【籁】【之】【音】【,】【美】【妙】【极】【了】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【午】【,】【茂】【密】【的】【竹】【叶】【将】【林】【子】【封】【闭】【得】【严】【严】【实】【实】【,】【似】【乎】【要】【遮】【住】【蔚】【蓝】【的】【天】【空】【,】【挡】【住】【人】【们】【的】【视】【线】【,】【挡】【住】【酷】【热】【的】【暑】【气】【。】【虽】【然】【如】【此】【苦】【心】【孤】【诣】【,】【雨】【后】【天】【空】【的】【彩】【虹】【却】【要】【来】【挑】【战】【一】【下】【它】【的】【实】【力】【。】【彩】【虹】【跨】【过】【屋】【顶】【、】【跨】【过】【柳】【叶】【、】【跨】【过】【葡】【萄】【的】【卷】【须】【、】【跨】【过】【滴】【水】【的】【草】【尖】【、】【跨】【过】【挂】【满】【雨】【水】【的】【蓓】【蕾】【,】【也】【跨】【过】【茂】【密】【的】【竹】【叶】【,】【来】【到】【竹】【林】【间】【,】【一】【切】【都】【显】【得】【那】【样】【自】【然】【、】【和】【谐】【、】【亲】【切】【、】【轻】【松】【。】【似】【乎】【这】【个】【世】【界】【本】【来】【就】【应】【该】【是】【这】【样】【的】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【幕】【降】【临】【,】【皎】【洁】【的】【月】【光】【穿】【过】【竹】【梢】【,】【银】【白】【色】【的】【竹】【叶】【逐】【渐】【静】【了】【下】【来】【。】【林】【子】【里】【的】【动】【物】【们】【、】【植】【物】【们】【都】【安】【卧】【在】【这】【片】【林】【子】【里】【面】【,】【次】【第】【进】【入】【梦】【乡】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【美】【丽】【的】【大】【自】【然】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【美】【丽】【的】【家】【乡】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【美】【丽】【的】【竹】【林】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【作】【者】【在】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【中】【,】【能】【按】【照】【时】【间】【先】【后】【顺】【序】【,】【描】【写】【家】【乡】【景】【物】【,】【层】【次】【井】【然】【,】【并】【能】【很】【好】【地】【抓】【住】【竹】【林】【如】【诗】【如】【画】【的】【特】【点】【,】【写】【出】【竹】【林】【的】【风】【采】【。】【可】【见】【小】【作】【者】【平】【日】【对】【生】【活】【做】【到】【了】【细】【细】【品】【味】【,】【只】【有】【这】【样】【,】【才】【能】【将】【自】【己】【的】【真】【切】【感】【受】【诉】【诸】【笔】【端】【,】【抒】【我】【情】【,】【写】【我】【心】【,】【这】【是】【值】【得】【肯】【定】【的】【,】【同】【时】【将】【林】【中】【的】【花】【鸟】【虫】【草】【细】【致】【描】【绘】【,】【做】【到】【静】【态】【与】【动】【态】【结】【合】【,】【远】【景】【、】【近】【景】【与】【特】【写】【镜】【头】【相】【结】【合】【,】【写】【出】【了】【层】【次】【感】【,】【令】【人】【陶】【醉】【。】【当】【然】【,】【从】【总】【体】【来】【看】【,】【对】【家】【乡】【景】【物】【的】【描】【绘】【,】【笔】【力】【还】【略】【显】【得】【单】【薄】【,】【还】【有】【进】【一】【步】【展】【开】【的】【余】【地】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【足】【之】【处】【是】【未】【能】【抓】【住】【竹】【子】【所】【象】【征】【的】【特】【有】【品】【质】【进】【行】【描】【绘】【,】【升】【华】【主】【题】【,】【如】【果】【能】【从】【其】【象】【征】【意】【义】【上】【开】【拓】【,】【化】【实】【为】【虚】【,】【文】【章】【就】【更】【有】【起】【色】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【黄】【晓】【枫】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【学】【阶】【段】【,】【我】【一】【直】【是】【个】【优】【秀】【的】【学】【生】【。】【上】【了】【初】【中】【以】【后】【,】【因】【为】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【喜】【欢】【上】【网】【,】【他】【总】【是】【在】【我】【面】【前】【吹】【嘘】【网】【络】【如】【何】【如】【何】【的】【神】【奇】【,】【如】【何】【如】【何】【的】【过】【瘾】【…】【…】【三】【番】【五】【次】【,】【我】【终】【于】【经】【不】【住】【他】【的】【引】【诱】【,】【跟】【着】【他】【第】【一】【次】【走】【进】【了】【网】【吧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【家】【里】【很】【富】【裕】【,】【他】【身】【上】【总】【是】【带】【着】【很】【多】【钱】【,】【随】【便】【伸】【手】【到】【口】【袋】【里】【一】【抓】【,】【就】【是】【数】【张】【百】【元】【大】【钞】【。】【开】【始】【上】【网】【的】【钱】【都】【是】【他】【帮】【我】【支】【付】【的】【,】【我】【没】【有】【出】【一】【分】【钱】【。】【他】【不】【但】【帮】【我】【出】【上】【网】【费】【,】【还】【手】【把】【手】【地】【教】【我】【如】【何】【操】【作】【,】【如】【何】【打】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【很】【快】【,】【我】【也】【就】【真】【正】【地】【喜】【欢】【上】【了】【网】【络】【这】【虚】【拟】【的】【世】【界】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【初】【,】【受】【到】【同】【桌】【的】【影】【响】【,】【是】【上】【网】【玩】【游】【戏】【。】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【真】【是】【太】【多】【了】【,】【太】【好】【玩】【了】【。】【什】【么】【《】【魔】【兽】【世】【界】【》】【《】【穿】【越】【火】【线】【》】【《】【地】【下】【城】【与】【勇】【士】【》】【呀】【,】【什】【么】【《】【永】【恒】【之】【塔】【》】【《】【降】【龙】【之】【剑】【》】【《】【龙】【之】【谷】【》】【《】【梦】【幻】【西】【游】【》】【《】【千】【军】【破】【》】【《】【夺】【宝】【传】【世】【》】【呀】【…】【…】【太】【多】【了】【,】【真】【是】【玩】【不】【胜】【玩】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【只】【是】【玩】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【,】【后】【来】【我】【又】【迷】【上】【了】【网】【络】【聊】【天】【和】【浏】【览】【色】【情】【网】【页】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【始】【是】【同】【桌】【帮】【我】【付】【钱】【,】【几】【周】【后】【他】【就】【不】【愿】【意】【付】【了】【,】【得】【我】【自】【己】【掏】【了】【。】【上】【网】【费】【虽】【然】【不】【多】【,】【每】【小】【时】【1】【.】【5】【元】【,】【后】【来】【涨】【到】【了】【2】【元】【。】【但】【由】【于】【我】【玩】【得】【时】【间】【太】【久】【了】【,】【往】【往】【一】【玩】【入】【迷】【,】【就】【是】【整】【整】【一】【上】【午】【或】【一】【下】【午】【4】【个】【小】【时】【。】【再】【后】【来】【是】【整】【整】【一】【个】【白】【昼】【1】【2】【个】【小】【时】【,】【最】【后】【是】【整】【整】【一】【天】【2】【4】【个】【小】【时】【。】【虽】【然】【晚】【上】【从】【1】【2】【点】【钟】【开】【始】【,】【一】【直】【到】【第】【二】【天】【早】【上】【的】【8】【点】【可】【以】【用】【1】【0】【元】【包】【下】【,】【省】【去】【6】【元】【,】【但】【算】【下】【来】【,】【2】【4】【小】【时】【的】【上】【网】【费】【也】【要】【4】【2】【元】【,】【加】【上】【吃】【饭】【、】【喝】【水】【的】【费】【用】【(】【就】【在】【网】【吧】【里】【买】【)】【,】【一】【天】【最】【少】【要】【花】【去】【5】【0】【元】【。】【几】【天】【下】【来】【,】【我】【就】【把】【一】【个】【月】【的】【生】【活】【费】【花】【光】【了】【。】【于】【是】【就】【东】【借】【西】【挪】【,】【只】【要】【能】【弄】【到】【钱】【,】【就】【什】【么】【都】【不】【顾】【不】【管】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【疯】【狂】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【和】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【,】【连】【续】【上】【网】【了】【四】【天】【三】【夜】【,】【除】【了】【上】【厕】【所】【,】【就】【未】【离】【开】【过】【一】【下】【座】【位】【。】【渴】【了】【饿】【了】【就】【叫】【老】【板】【买】【水】【买】【饭】【,】【累】【了】【困】【了】【就】【趴】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【打】【个】【盹】【。】【至】【于】【上】【课】【、】【学】【习】【、】【外】【面】【的】【事】【情】【一】【概】【不】【知】【不】【管】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【家】【里】【是】【农】【村】【的】【,】【父】【母】【辛】【辛】【苦】【苦】【劳】【作】【一】【年】【的】【收】【入】【,】【只】【够】【维】【持】【一】【家】【人】【的】【基】【本】【生】【活】【,】【我】【上】【初】【中】【的】【费】【用】【虽】【然】【不】【多】【,】【但】【还】【是】【感】【到】【紧】【张】【。】【虽】【然】【免】【除】【了】【学】【杂】【费】【,】【但】【由】【于】【我】【住】【校】【,】【生】【活】【费】【还】【是】【不】【能】【少】【的】【。】【一】【个】【月】【3】【0】【0】【元】【左】【右】【的】【生】【活】【费】【,】【父】【母】【都】【掏】【得】【非】【常】【紧】【张】【,】【但】【他】【们】【还】【是】【乐】【于】【给】【他】【们】【的】【儿】【子】【我】【,】【还】【总】【是】【说】【,】【不】【够】【的】【话】【再】【回】【家】【拿】【。】【开】【始】【时】【我】【还】【会】【想】【想】【这】【些】【情】【况】【,】【想】【想】【父】【母】【的】【辛】【苦】【,】【但】【自】【从】【我】【迷】【上】【网】【络】【以】【后】【,】【就】【从】【不】【想】【这】【些】【了】【,】【没】【钱】【我】【就】【伸】【手】【向】【父】【母】【要】【。】【由】【于】【要】【得】【太】【多】【太】【频】【繁】【了】【,】【父】【母】【就】【追】【问】【我】【原】【因】【,】【我】【总】【是】【搪】【塞】【他】【们】【说】【学】【校】【里】【买】【这】【买】【那】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【由】【于】【请】【病】【假】【太】【多】【,】【逃】【课】【太】【多】【,】【成】【绩】【自】【然】【是】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【,】【从】【班】【上】【的】【前】【5】【名】【,】【一】【下】【落】【到】【了】【班】【上】【的】【最】【后】【5】【名】【。】【由】【于】【要】【钱】【要】【得】【太】【多】【太】【频】【繁】【,】【父】【母】【追】【问】【到】【了】【学】【校】【,】【老】【师】【和】【父】【母】【一】【碰】【头】【,】【我】【的】【“】【末】【日】【”】【也】【就】【到】【了】【。】【由】【于】【身】【体】【瘦】【掉】【了】【十】【多】【斤】【,】【加】【上】【父】【母】【的】【一】【顿】【猛】【揍】【,】【我】【昏】【了】【过】【去】【…】【…】【从】【医】【院】【出】【来】【后】【,】【泪】【水】【模】【糊】【了】【父】【母】【的】【双】【眼】【,】【也】【模】【糊】【了】【我】【的】【双】【眼】【…】【…】【学】【校】【勒】【令】【我】【停】【课】【一】【周】【,】【回】【家】【反】【省】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【看】【着】【家】【里】【的】【空】【空】【荡】【荡】【,】【家】【徒】【四】【壁】【,】【看】【到】【父】【母】【的】【寒】【酸】【饭】【菜】【…】【…】【我】【猛】【烈】【地】【抽】【打】【我】【自】【己】【。】【漫】【长】【的】【一】【周】【,】【地】【狱】【般】【的】【一】【周】【反】【省】【,】【我】【脱】【胎】【换】【骨】【了】【。】【我】【再】【也】【不】【上】【网】【吧】【了】【,】【有】【百】【害】【而】【无】【益】【处】【,】【痛】【苦】【的】【代】【价】【让】【我】【终】【于】【醒】【悟】【到】【了】【这】【些】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【经】【历】【过】【死】【亡】【的】【人】【,】【更】【懂】【得】【生】【命】【的】【可】【贵】【。】【是】【啊】【,】【我】【对】【这】【话】【理】【解】【得】【更】【深】【了】【。】【一】【个】【人】【不】【能】【沉】【溺】【,】【更】【不】【能】【入】【迷】【,】【特】【别】【是】【对】【人】【生】【无】【益】【的】【事】【情】【,】【沉】【溺】【、】【入】【迷】【了】【是】【很】【危】【险】【、】【很】【可】【怕】【的】【。】【回】【想】【曾】【经】【的】【我】【,】【现】【在】【都】【仍】【然】【心】【有】【余】【悸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【生】【活】【即】【有】【作】【文】【,】【写】【真】【情】【、】【抒】【真】【意】【即】【是】【好】【作】【文】【。】【该】【文】【叙】【写】【自】【己】【的】【一】【次】【误】【入】【歧】【途】【的】【经】【历】【,】【向】【我】【们】【敞】【开】【了】【他】【的】【心】【扉】【,】【历】【数】【了】【他】【自】【身】【的】【不】【是】【,】【并】【没】【有】【去】【怨】【天】【尤】【人】【,】【而】【是】【深】【深】【地】【反】【省】【自】【己】【,】【并】【获】【得】【了】【对】【生】【活】【对】【生】【命】【的】【深】【刻】【认】【识】【和】【感】【悟】【,】【将】【坏】【事】【变】【成】【了】【好】【事】【。】【与】【其】【说】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【不】【如】【说】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【发】【出】【肺】【腑】【之】【言】【的】【忏】【悔】【录】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【:】【苦】【海】【无】【边】【,】【回】【头】【是】【岸】【。】【值】【得】【庆】【幸】【的】【是】【,】【小】【作】【者】【经】【历】【了】【一】【番】【波】【折】【以】【后】【,】【终】【于】【认】【识】【到】【自】【己】【行】【为】【的】【错】【误】【性】【,】【这】【是】【非】【常】【警】【醒】【人】【的】【,】【很】【值】【得】【那】【些】【仍】【然】【沉】【迷】【于】【网】【吧】【的】【同】【学】【参】【考】【、】【借】【鉴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【弗】【不】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【技】【法】【点】【拨】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【俗】【话】【说】【,】【“】【从】【善】【如】【登】【,】【从】【恶】【如】【崩】【”】【。】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【如】【果】【被】【网】【瘾】【这】【个】【恶】【魔】【“】【附】【体】【”】【,】【可】【真】【如】【崩】【坍】【之】【山】【,】【决】【堤】【之】【水】【,】【其】【后】【果】【是】【很】【可】【怕】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【崩】【溃】【”】【的】【过】【程】【是】【迅】【猛】【的】【,】【但】【作】【者】【的】【叙】【述】【却】【是】【层】【层】【剥】【笋】【,】【逐】【步】【展】【开】【。】【先】【是】【迷】【恋】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【,】【接】【着】【又】【迷】【上】【了】【网】【络】【聊】【天】【,】【甚】【至】【于】【浏】【览】【色】【情】【网】【页】【,】【一】【步】【步】【走】【向】【深】【渊】【。】【就】【这】【样】【一】【个】【出】【身】【贫】【寒】【的】【孩】【子】【,】【学】【会】【了】【挥】【霍】【,】【学】【会】【了】【说】【谎】【,】【开】【始】【还】【有】【内】【疚】【,】【有】【怜】【悯】【心】【,】【有】【耻】【辱】【感】【,】【但】【在】【精】【神】【鸦】【片】【的】【腐】【蚀】【下】【,】【很】【快】【就】【麻】【木】【了】【。】【紧】【接】【着】【是】【身】【体】【的】【透】【支】【,】【学】【习】【成】【绩】【的】【一】【落】【千】【丈】【,】【如】【多】【米】【诺】【骨】【牌】【倒】【塌】【效】【应】【一】【般】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【采】【用】【先】【叙】【后】【议】【,】【叙】【写】【沉】【沦】【,】【文】【字】【细】【密】【,】【为】【的】【是】【告】【诫】【读】【者】【,】【要】【提】【高】【警】【惕】【。】【而】【叙】【写】【觉】【醒】【,】【文】【字】【疏】【简】【,】【“】【漫】【长】【的】【一】【周】【”】【,】【写】【起】【来】【不】【足】【百】【字】【,】【一】【个】【“】【地】【狱】【般】【的】【反】【省】【”】【,】【一】【个】【“】【脱】【胎】【换】【骨】【”】【,】【就】【足】【以】【传】【达】【出】【内】【心】【的】【悔】【恨】【。】【因】【为】【此】【时】【“】【我】【”】【的】【心】【情】【,】【读】【者】【完】【全】【能】【够】【想】【象】【出】【来】【,】【所】【以】【不】【必】【太】【多】【叙】【述】【。】【最】【后】【一】【段】【,】【发】【出】【议】【论】【,】【卒】【章】【显】【志】【,】【画】【龙】【点】【睛】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【甫】【田】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】韩国慕色摄影【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【试】【题】【导】【入】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【的】【家】【乡】【每】【天】【都】【在】【变】【化】【着】【,】【城】【市】【在】【变】【化】【,】【农】【村】【在】【变】【化】【,】【人】【们】【的】【生】【活】【在】【变】【化】【。】【楼】【房】【越】【来】【越】【多】【,】【房】【屋】【越】【来】【越】【亮】【堂】【,】【道】【路】【越】【来】【越】【宽】【,】【路】【边】【绿】【化】【也】【越】【来】【越】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【们】【在】【追】【求】【物】【质】【生】【活】【的】【同】【时】【,】【对】【精】【神】【生】【活】【也】【有】【了】【新】【的】【追】【求】【。】【衣】【食】【无】【忧】【的】【人】【们】【开】【始】【关】【注】【外】【面】【的】【世】【界】【,】【关】【注】【中】【国】【的】【经】【济】【发】【展】【,】【关】【注】【世】【界】【的】【热】【点】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【留】【心】【身】【边】【的】【这】【种】【变】【化】【了】【吗】【?】【细】【致】【观】【察】【并】【深】【切】【感】【受】【你】【身】【边】【的】【这】【种】【变】【化】【,】【用】【生】【动】【的】【文】【笔】【描】【绘】【你】【的】【所】【察】【所】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【“】【家】【乡】【新】【变】【化】【”】【为】【话】【题】【写】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【文】【体】【不】【限】【,】【题】【目】【自】【拟】【,】【6】【0】【0】【字】【以】【上】【。】【要】【写】【出】【真】【感】【受】【、】【真】【变】【化】【,】【既】【可】【写】【事】【物】【,】【又】【可】【写】【人】【物】【,】【切】【忌】【泛】【泛】【而】【谈】【,】【空】【洞】【乏】【味】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【指】【导】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【描】【写】【家】【乡】【的】【新】【变】【化】【,】【必】【须】【细】【致】【观】【察】【并】【深】【切】【感】【受】【这】【种】【变】【化】【:】【感】【受】【社】【会】【现】【象】【的】【变】【化】【,】【感】【受】【发】【展】【动】【力】【的】【变】【化】【;】【感】【受】【物】【质】【生】【活】【的】【变】【化】【,】【感】【受】【精】【神】【世】【界】【的】【变】【化】【。】【比】【如】【乡】【村】【的】【城】【镇】【化】【,】【农】【业】【的】【现】【代】【化】【,】【手】【机】【的】【普】【及】【化】【,】【衣】【着】【的】【时】【尚】【化】【,】【轿】【车】【的】【家】【庭】【化】【,】【城】【市】【的】【园】【林】【化】【,】【街】【道】【的】【宽】【敞】【化】【,】【建】【筑】【的】【个】【性】【化】【,】【饮】【食】【的】【营】【养】【化】【,】【科】【技】【的】【尖】【端】【化】【,】【精】【神】【的】【多】【彩】【化】【…】【…】【要】【把】【握】【自】【己】【最】【感】【兴】【趣】【的】【一】【点】【,】【积】【累】【感】【受】【和】【灵】【感】【,】【有】【话】【可】【说】【,】【以】【小】【见】【大】【,】【能】【感】【染】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【变】【化】【,】【就】【要】【注】【重】【写】【今】【昔】【的】【对】【比】【。】【既】【可】【写】【人】【物】【、】【事】【物】【的】【变】【化】【,】【又】【可】【写】【景】【物】【的】【变】【化】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【描】【写】【家】【乡】【的】【新】【变】【化】【,】【自】【然】【要】【以】【记】【叙】【为】【主】【,】【要】【选】【取】【典】【型】【而】【生】【动】【的】【事】【例】【,】【由】【“】【点】【”】【入】【手】【,】【以】【点】【示】【面】【,】【从】【而】【充】【分】【地】【表】【达】【意】【旨】【。】【比】【如】【写】【人】【,】【要】【写】【出】【人】【物】【精】【神】【世】【界】【的】【变】【化】【;】【写】【事】【物】【,】【要】【写】【出】【事】【物】【变】【化】【的】【过】【程】【,】【要】【注】【重】【事】【例】【的】【细】【节】【化】【、】【故】【事】【化】【、】【生】【动】【化】【,】【切】【忌】【面】【面】【俱】【到】【,】【泛】【泛】【而】【述】【,】【空】【洞】【无】【物】【。】【比】【如】【下】【面】【这】【段】【文】【字】【—】【—】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【来】【到】【了】【家】【乡】【,】【啊】【!】【真】【美】【!】【难】【道】【这】【是】【我】【的】【眼】【睛】【花】【了】【?】【我】【揉】【了】【揉】【眼】【睛】【,】【没】【有】【呀】【?】【本】【来】【以】【前】【那】【坑】【坑】【洼】【洼】【、】【崎】【岖】【不】【平】【的】【小】【路】【,】【现】【在】【已】【变】【成】【一】【条】【平】【平】【坦】【坦】【的】【柏】【油】【路】【,】【路】【两】【旁】【种】【满】【了】【花】【草】【树】【木】【,】【蜜】【蜂】【在】【唱】【歌】【,】【蝴】【蝶】【在】【跳】【舞】【,】【高】【楼】【大】【厦】【拔】【地】【而】【起】【。】【我】【和】【爸】【爸】【来】【到】【叔】【叔】【家】【,】【哇】【,】【叔】【叔】【家】【也】【变】【了】【,】【房】【子】【很】【大】【很】【大】【,】【墙】【壁】【刷】【得】【雪】【白】【雪】【白】【的】【,】【装】【修】【豪】【华】【。】【家】【具】【也】【是】【崭】【新】【的】【,】【刻】【着】【龙】【凤】【图】【案】【。】【他】【们】【再】【也】【不】【用】【灶】【头】【煮】【东】【西】【了】【,】【都】【换】【成】【煤】【气】【炉】【,】【方】【便】【快】【捷】【…】【…】【我】【好】【像】【到】【了】【人】【间】【仙】【境】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【上】【文】【字】【缺】【乏】【深】【切】【的】【感】【受】【,】【蜻】【蜓】【点】【水】【,】【面】【面】【俱】【到】【,】【泛】【泛】【堆】【砌】【,】【且】【有】【一】【些】【说】【大】【话】【、】【喊】【口】【号】【的】【意】【味】【,】【自】【然】【空】【洞】【乏】【味】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【在】【叙】【述】【手】【法】【上】【,】【可】【巧】【用】【倒】【叙】【,】【以】【求】【详】【略】【得】【当】【,】【举】【重】【若】【轻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【佳】【作】【展】【示】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【有】【电】【视】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【孟】【庆】【杰】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【 】【对】【奶】【奶】【话】【最】【感】【兴】【趣】【的】【是】【妈】【妈】【。】【妈】【妈】【接】【上】【话】【茬】【:】【“】【我】【像】【你】【们】【这】【么】【大】【的】【时】【候】【,】【最】【爱】【看】【电】【影】【了】【。】【”】【“】【你】【到】【哪】【儿】【的】【电】【影】【院】【去】【看】【啊】【?】【”】【妹】【妹】【好】【奇】【地】【问】【。】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【哪】【里】【是】【到】【什】【么】【电】【影】【院】【呐】【。】【那】【时】【候】【公】【社】【里】【的】【电】【影】【队】【一】【年】【到】【每】【个】【村】【放】【几】【次】【电】【影】【。】【电】【影】【队】【来】【本】【村】【呀】【,】【我】【就】【催】【家】【人】【早】【早】【做】【饭】【,】【吃】【饭】【。】【没】【等】【天】【黑】【,】【人】【家】【影】【布】【扯】【起】【来】【,】【我】【就】【搬】【矮】【凳】【抢】【占】【个】【好】【地】【方】【。】【有】【时】【候】【饭】【都】【顾】【不】【上】【吃】【,】【饿】【着】【肚】【子】【看】【完】【电】【影】【再】【回】【家】【吃】【。】【外】【村】【放】【电】【影】【,】【我】【就】【跟】【着】【大】【人】【们】【去】【。】【那】【时】【候】【哇】【,】【看】【电】【影】【可】【是】【新】【鲜】【事】【,】【十】【几】【个】【村】【子】【的】【人】【挤】【成】【黑】【压】【压】【一】【片】【。】【有】【时】【候】【电】【影】【放】【到】【半】【夜】【,】【人】【们】【还】【在】【看】【。】【有】【时】【有】【人】【搞】【恶】【作】【剧】【,】【说】【外】【村】【来】【了】【电】【影】【,】【我】【们】【就】【急】【匆】【匆】【赶】【了】【去】【,】【结】【果】【挨】【了】【骗】【,】【就】【只】【好】【一】【路】【吵】【吵】【嚷】【嚷】【,】【屁】【颠】【屁】【颠】【地】【赶】【回】【来】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【搭】【话】【:】【“】【还】【是】【你】【们】【有】【福】【。】【饭】【来】【张】【口】【,】【衣】【来】【伸】【手】【。】【没】【事】【就】【待】【在】【家】【里】【看】【电】【视】【,】【你】【们】【生】【在】【什】【么】【时】【候】【哇】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【有】【什】【么】【福】【呀】【?】【”】【妹】【妹】【一】【努】【嘴】【,】【“】【人】【家】【都】【是】【二】【十】【五】【寸】【、】【二】【十】【九】【寸】【的】【大】【彩】【电】【了】【,】【咱】【家】【还】【是】【这】【么】【个】【二】【十】【一】【寸】【的】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【这】【个】【小】【妮】【子】【,】【身】【在】【福】【中】【还】【不】【知】【足】【!】【”】【奶】【奶】【脸】【一】【阴】【,】【有】【点】【生】【气】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妹】【妹】【吐】【了】【吐】【舌】【头】【躲】【一】【边】【。】【我】【拉】【着】【奶】【奶】【的】【手】【说】【:】【“】【奶】【奶】【,】【咱】【家】【也】【该】【买】【大】【彩】【电】【了】【,】【大】【彩】【电】【比】【小】【的】【更】【好】【看】【。】【买】【了】【大】【彩】【电】【,】【这】【小】【彩】【电】【就】【归】【你】【自】【己】【,】【光】【让】【你】【看】【戏】【。】【行】【吧】【,】【奶】【奶】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【咱】【家】【是】【该】【买】【大】【彩】【电】【了】【。】【这】【事】【已】【列】【入】【计】【划】【,】【近】【期】【就】【办】【!】【要】【买】【,】【就】【买】【好】【的】【,】【买】【一】【台】【液】【晶】【大】【屏】【的】【,】【而】【且】【连】【电】【脑】【一】【块】【买】【。】【年】【底】【看】【中】【央】【电】【视】【台】【春】【节】【晚】【会】【,】【保】【证】【看】【的】【是】【大】【彩】【电】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【在】【外】【屋】【发】【表】【“】【严】【正】【声】【明】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妹】【妹】【乐】【了】【:】【“】【电】【脑】【归】【我】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【忙】【说】【:】【“】【是】【为】【了】【你】【和】【你】【姐】【姐】【的】【学】【习】【买】【的】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【一】【听】【笑】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【笑】【了】【。】【我】【和】【妹】【妹】【也】【笑】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【候】【,】【妹】【妹】【调】【换】【了】【频】【道】【,】【电】【视】【里】【播】【放】【的】【是】【奶】【奶】【最】【爱】【看】【的】【戏】【—】【—】【“】【咿】【呀】【咿】【呀】【咿】【咿】【呀】【呀】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【围】【绕】【家】【庭】【关】【于】【电】【视】【的】【话】【题】【,】【单】【刀】【直】【入】【,】【如】【数】【家】【珍】【,】【曲】【折】【细】【腻】【,】【摇】【曳】【多】【姿】【,】【巧】【忆】【往】【事】【,】【今】【昔】【对】【比】【,】【反】【映】【了】【百】【姓】【生】【活】【水】【平】【的】【不】【断】【提】【高】【,】【折】【射】【了】【时】【代】【的】【巨】【大】【变】【化】【,】【以】【小】【见】【大】【,】【意】【旨】【深】【切】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【通】【篇】【以】【人】【物】【对】【话】【而】【制】【胜】【。】【对】【话】【富】【有】【浓】【郁】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【个】【性】【鲜】【明】【。】【特】【别】【是】【奶】【奶】【的】【话】【,】【别】【有】【情】【趣】【。】【文】【章】【结】【构】【简】【明】【自】【然】【,】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【心】【练】【笔】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【“】【身】【边】【的】【变】【化】【”】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【个】【作】【文】【片】【段】【,】【要】【运】【用】【细】【节】【描】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【法】【点】【拨】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【事】【物】【的】【变】【化】【过】【程】【,】【可】【运】【用】【场】【面】【描】【写】【或】【景】【物】【描】【写】【;】【写】【人】【物】【的】【变】【化】【,】【可】【灵】【活】【运】【用】【语】【言】【描】【写】【和】【行】【动】【描】【写】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【积】【累】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【一】【年】【没】【回】【家】【了】【。】【走】【在】【家】【乡】【熟】【悉】【的】【街】【道】【上】【,】【我】【却】【有】【了】【一】【种】【陌】【生】【感】【。】【不】【少】【人】【家】【新】【盖】【了】【二】【层】【小】【楼】【,】【弄】【不】【清】【到】【底】【是】【谁】【家】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【见】【了】【我】【高】【兴】【地】【合】【不】【拢】【嘴】【:】【“】【妮】【子】【,】【我】【让】【你】【饱】【一】【饱】【口】【福】【。】【”】【等】【饭】【菜】【端】【上】【来】【,】【我】【愣】【了】【:】【“】【奶】【奶】【,】【我】【还】【以】【为】【你】【给】【我】【做】【了】【大】【鱼】【大】【肉】【呢】【…】【…】【”】【奶】【奶】【做】【个】【鬼】【脸】【:】【“】【傻】【妮】【子】【,】【这】【年】【头】【大】【鱼】【大】【肉】【都】【吃】【腻】【了】【,】【有】【啥】【好】【吃】【的】【?】【现】【在】【电】【视】【里】【说】【要】【吃】【绿】【色】【,】【吃】【营】【养】【。】【你】【看】【,】【这】【饭】【菜】【你】【不】【愿】【吃】【啊】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【饭】【桌】【上】【摆】【上】【了】【奶】【奶】【亲】【手】【酿】【的】【面】【酱】【,】【还】【有】【大】【葱】【,】【曲】【曲】【菜】【、】【婆】【婆】【丁】【等】【别】【有】【药】【效】【的】【野】【菜】【,】【香】【喷】【喷】【的】【窝】【窝】【头】【。】【外】【加】【一】【大】【盆】【紫】【菜】【鸡】【蛋】【汤】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【于】【是】【埋】【头】【吃】【了】【个】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【。】【心】【里】【直】【感】【叹】【连】【老】【人】【的】【饮】【食】【观】【念】【都】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【了】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【窗】【外】【的】【景】【色】【就】【是】【这】【么】【美】【,】【窗】【外】【的】【四】【季】【,】【每】【一】【季】【都】【不】【重】【复】【,】【各】【有】【千】【秋】【。】【其】【实】【,】【生】【活】【中】【不】【是】【缺】【少】【美】【,】【而】【是】【缺】【少】【一】【双】【发】【现】【美】【的】【眼】【睛】【,】【窗】【户】【就】【是】【我】【发】【现】【美】【的】【一】【双】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【眼】【睛】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【!】韩国慕色摄影【生】【活】【中】【往】【往】【有】【许】【多】【小】【事】【物】【都】【能】【通】【过】【观】【察】【,】【会】【有】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【新】【发】【现】【,】【这】【些】【发】【现】【也】【方】【便】【了】【人】【们】【的】【生】【活】【。】

韩国慕色摄影:“友善互助”美德少年:文明友善美德少年事迹材料

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【叙】【文】【靠】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【的】【形】【象】【感】【人】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【我】【们】【无】【论】【是】【记】【人】【叙】【事】【,】【还】【是】【写】【景】【状】【物】【,】【都】【应】【具】【体】【生】【动】【,】【有】【血】【有】【肉】【,】【切】【忌】【空】【泛】【造】【假】【,】【贫】【瘠】【枯】【瘦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【先】【谈】【写】【人】【。】【写】【人】【除】【了】【必】【须】【具】【体】【描】【写】【人】【物】【的】【外】【貌】【、】【表】【情】【、】【动】【作】【、】【语】【言】【外】【,】【还】【要】【注】【意】【细】【节】【描】【写】【。】【这】【是】【突】【出】【人】【物】【性】【格】【,】【把】【人】【物】【写】【得】【精】【彩】【的】【重】【要】【手】【段】【。】【有】【些】【同】【学】【恰】【恰】【忽】【略】【了】【这】【一】【点】【。】【他】【们】【写】【人】【,】【往】【往】【采】【用】【“】【贴】【标】【签】【”】【的】【方】【法】【,】【首】【先】【给】【他】【“】【定】【了】【性】【”】【,】【堆】【砌】【几】【个】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【,】【如】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【有】【一】【个】【好】【妈】【妈】【,】【慈】【祥】【的】【脸】【上】【永】【远】【带】【着】【和】【蔼】【的】【笑】【容】【。】【因】【为】【旧】【社】【会】【她】【没】【有】【念】【过】【多】【少】【书】【,】【所】【以】【总】【是】【一】【个】【劲】【地】【督】【促】【我】【们】【好】【好】【学】【习】【,】【并】【在】【生】【活】【上】【、】【学】【习】【上】【对】【我】【百】【般】【照】【顾】【,】【无】【微】【不】【至】【,】【处】【处】【体】【现】【了】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【后】【面】【还】【有】【具】【体】【的】【描】【写】【,】【这】【段】【话】【作】【为】【开】【头】【,】【当】【然】【可】【以】【,】【但】【遗】【憾】【的】【是】【,】【这】【竟】【是】【文】【章】【的】【主】【体】【部】【分】【。】【仅】【用】【“】【百】【般】【照】【顾】【”】【“】【无】【微】【不】【至】【”】【“】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【”】【这】【些】【空】【洞】【的】【词】【语】【,】【能】【说】【明】【母】【亲】【就】【是】【一】【个】【“】【好】【妈】【妈】【”】【吗】【?】【这】【很】【难】【使】【人】【信】【服】【,】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【就】【写】【得】【具】【体】【多】【了】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【不】【知】【什】【么】【声】【音】【把】【我】【从】【梦】【中】【惊】【醒】【,】【我】【睁】【开】【眼】【睛】【一】【看】【,】【厨】【房】【里】【的】【灯】【已】【经】【亮】【了】【,】【不】【时】【传】【来】【锅】【碗】【的】【轻】【响】【。】【我】【伸】【手】【拿】【过】【桌】【上】【的】【闹】【钟】【,】【借】【着】【从】【厨】【房】【里】【映】【过】【来】【的】【亮】【光】【看】【了】【看】【,】【还】【不】【到】【五】【点】【。】【今】【天】【是】【星】【期】【日】【,】【妈】【妈】【还】【和】【往】【常】【一】【样】【,】【起】【得】【这】【样】【早】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【翻】【过】【身】【,】【细】【听】【着】【厨】【房】【里】【的】【声】【响】【。】【“】【哗】【—】【—】【”】【,】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【轻】【轻】【地】【舀】【水】【;】【“】【哧】【—】【—】【噗】【!】【”】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【开】【煤】【气】【炉】【;】【“】【咔】【啦】【咔】【啦】【”】【,】【这】【是】【妈】【妈】【在】【拿】【碗】【筷】【。】【在】【静】【静】【的】【清】【晨】【,】【这】【声】【音】【是】【那】【样】【的】【清】【晰】【,】【又】【是】【那】【样】【的】【熟】【悉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【用】【醒】【来】【的】【所】【见】【、】【所】【闻】【,】【具】【体】【地】【写】【出】【了】【妈】【妈】【每】【天】【起】【早】【做】【饭】【的】【情】【景】【。】【这】【真】【实】【、】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【、】【形】【象】【的】【记】【叙】【比】【起】【对】【妈】【妈】【“】【任】【劳】【任】【怨】【、】【辛】【勤】【劳】【作】【”】【的】【赞】【叹】【,】【不】【知】【要】【强】【多】【少】【倍】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【家】【都】【知】【道】【《】【水】【浒】【传】【》】【中】【的】【打】【虎】【英】【雄】【是】【武】【松】【,】【而】【不】【是】【李】【逵】【。】【为】【什】【么】【武】【松】【打】【死】【一】【只】【虎】【会】【深】【深】【地】【震】【动】【我】【们】【的】【心】【弦】【,】【而】【李】【逵】【杀】【了】【四】【只】【虎】【,】【留】【给】【读】【者】【的】【印】【象】【却】【远】【不】【如】【武】【松】【呢】【?】【这】【里】【面】【的】【诀】【窍】【就】【在】【一】【个】【描】【绘】【的】【具】【体】【生】【动】【,】【精】【彩】【异】【常】【,】【另】【一】【个】【则】【“】【缺】【少】【细】【节】【,】【贫】【瘠】【枯】【瘦】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【细】【节】【不】【仅】【能】【充】【实】【内】【容】【,】【使】【之】【具】【有】【浓】【厚】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【具】【有】【震】【撼】【人】【心】【的】【艺】【术】【力】【量】【,】【更】【重】【要】【的】【是】【,】【具】【有】【典】【型】【意】【义】【的】【细】【节】【,】【能】【表】【现】【出】【人】【物】【鲜】【明】【的】【个】【性】【。】【吴】【敬】【梓】【的】【《】【儒】【林】【外】【史】【》】【中】【,】【有】【一】【段】【对】【严】【监】【生】【死】【前】【伸】【着】【两】【个】【指】【头】【这】【一】【细】【节】【的】【描】【写】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【此】【,】【严】【监】【生】【的】【病】【,】【一】【日】【重】【似】【一】【日】【,】【再】【不】【回】【头】【,】【诸】【来】【六】【眷】【都】【来】【问】【候】【…】【…】【晚】【间】【挤】【了】【一】【屋】【的】【人】【,】【桌】【上】【点】【着】【一】【盏】【灯】【。】【严】【监】【生】【喉】【咙】【里】【痰】【响】【得】【一】【进】【一】【出】【,】【一】【声】【不】【倒】【一】【声】【的】【,】【总】【不】【得】【断】【气】【,】【还】【把】【手】【从】【被】【单】【里】【拿】【出】【来】【,】【伸】【着】【两】【个】【指】【头】【。】【大】【侄】【子】【走】【上】【前】【来】【问】【道】【:】【“】【二】【叔】【,】【你】【莫】【不】【是】【还】【有】【两】【个】【亲】【人】【不】【曾】【见】【面】【?】【”】【他】【就】【把】【头】【摇】【了】【两】【三】【摇】【。】【二】【侄】【子】【走】【上】【前】【来】【问】【道】【:】【“】【二】【叔】【,】【莫】【不】【是】【还】【有】【两】【笔】【银】【子】【在】【那】【里】【,】【不】【曾】【吩】【咐】【明】【白】【?】【”】【他】【把】【两】【眼】【睁】【得】【溜】【圆】【,】【把】【头】【又】【狠】【狠】【摇】【了】【几】【摇】【,】【越】【发】【指】【得】【紧】【了】【。】【奶】【妈】【抱】【着】【哥】【子】【插】【口】【道】【:】【“】【老】【爷】【想】【是】【因】【为】【两】【位】【舅】【爷】【不】【在】【跟】【前】【,】【故】【此】【惦】【念】【。】【”】【他】【听】【了】【这】【话】【,】【把】【眼】【闭】【着】【摇】【头】【,】【那】【手】【只】【是】【指】【着】【不】【动】【。】【赵】【氏】【慌】【忙】【揩】【揩】【眼】【泪】【,】【走】【近】【上】【前】【道】【:】【“】【爷】【,】【别】【人】【都】【说】【不】【相】【干】【,】【只】【有】【我】【晓】【得】【你】【的】【意】【思】【!】【”】【…】【…】【“】【你】【是】【为】【那】【灯】【盏】【里】【点】【的】【是】【两】【茎】【灯】【草】【,】【不】【放】【心】【,】【恐】【费】【了】【油】【。】【我】【如】【今】【挑】【掉】【一】【茎】【就】【是】【了】【。】【”】【说】【罢】【,】【忙】【走】【出】【挑】【掉】【一】【茎】【。】【众】【人】【看】【严】【监】【生】【时】【,】【点】【一】【点】【头】【,】【把】【手】【垂】【下】【,】【登】【时】【就】【没】【了】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【严】【监】【生】【是】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【,】【因】【为】【多】【点】【一】【茎】【灯】【草】【,】【死】【不】【瞑】【目】【。】【作】【者】【通】【过】【这】【一】【典】【型】【细】【节】【的】【描】【绘】【,】【把】【这】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【特】【有】【的】【精】【神】【面】【貌】【和】【鲜】【明】【个】【性】【深】【刻】【地】【表】【现】【出】【来】【了】【。】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【地】【表】【现】【了】【这】【个】【吝】【啬】【鬼】【的】【丑】【恶】【灵】【魂】【,】【真】【是】【写】【得】【入】【木】【三】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【这】【里】【也】【可】【以】【看】【出】【,】【选】【择】【细】【节】【要】【根】【据】【表】【现】【人】【物】【性】【格】【的】【需】【要】【和】【表】【现】【主】【题】【的】【需】【要】【,】【否】【则】【再】【生】【动】【的】【细】【节】【也】【毫】【无】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【说】【记】【事】【。】【要】【把】【一】【件】【事】【写】【得】【具】【体】【,】【就】【得】【抓】【住】【重】【点】【详】【写】【,】【要】【浓】【墨】【重】【彩】【,】【要】【精】【雕】【细】【刻】【,】【不】【能】【只】【用】【那】【些】【概】【括】【抽】【象】【的】【语】【言】【。】【如】【,】【同】【样】【是】【写】【《】【联】【欢】【会】【》】【,】【一】【个】【同】【学】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【联】【欢】【会】【开】【得】【太】【热】【烈】【,】【太】【丰】【富】【,】【太】【激】【动】【人】【心】【了】【!】【悦】【耳】【的】【歌】【声】【,】【翩】【翩】【的】【舞】【姿】【,】【还】【有】【增】【长】【才】【智】【的】【文】【学】【知】【识】【抢】【答】【,】【从】【下】【午】【2】【点】【一】【直】【进】【行】【到】【8】【点】【,】【大】【家】【才】【恋】【恋】【不】【舍】【地】【离】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【里】【,】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【掩】【盖】【不】【了】【内】【容】【的】【空】【洞】【,】【铿】【锵】【的】【语】【句】【难】【以】【粉】【饰】【内】【在】【的】【贫】【乏】【。】【须】【知】【,】【“】【热】【烈】【”】【“】【丰】【富】【”】【“】【激】【动】【人】【心】【”】【,】【只】【有】【通】【过】【事】【件】【表】【现】【出】【来】【,】【才】【是】【成】【功】【的】【记】【事】【。】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【就】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【得】【多】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【水】【,】【水】【落】【石】【出】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【出】【,】【出】【其】【不】【意】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【意】【,】【意】【气】【风】【发】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【发】【,】【发】【扬】【光】【大】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【大】【,】【大】【义】【凛】【然】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【然】【,】【然】【—】【—】【然】【—】【—】【”】【这】【下】【可】【把】【周】【皓】【月】【难】【住】【了】【,】【只】【见】【她】【双】【眉】【紧】【锁】【,】【在】【极】【力】【思】【考】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【请】【周】【皓】【月】【表】【演】【节】【目】【!】【”】【班】【主】【任】【曹】【老】【师】【话】【音】【刚】【落】【“】【哗】【—】【—】【”】【掌】【声】【雷】【动】【,】【周】【皓】【月】【落】【落】【大】【方】【地】【走】【上】【台】【,】【放】【开】【歌】【喉】【唱】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【联】【欢】【会】【又】【进】【行】【下】【一】【个】【节】【目】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【现】【在】【,】【我】【把】【某】【个】【同】【学】【的】【面】【貌】【描】【绘】【一】【下】【,】【请】【同】【学】【们】【说】【出】【这】【人】【是】【谁】【。】【”】【班】【主】【任】【说】【道】【:】【“】【白】【皙】【的】【皮】【肤】【,】【眼】【睛】【虽】【不】【大】【,】【可】【炯】【炯】【有】【神】【,】【剪】【着】【一】【个】【游】【泳】【头】【,】【一】【副】【运】【动】【员】【的】【样】【子】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【们】【你】【瞧】【瞧】【我】【,】【我】【望】【望】【你】【,】【突】【然】【,】【不】【知】【哪】【位】【同】【学】【说】【:】【“】【是】【沈】【玉】【兰】【!】【”】【顿】【时】【,】【几】【十】【道】【眼】【光】【一】【下】【子】【集】【中】【到】【沈】【玉】【兰】【身】【上】【,】【继】【而】【人】【们】【又】【摇】【头】【否】【认】【,】【不】【对】【!】【沈】【玉】【兰】【梳】【着】【两】【条】【小】【辫】【子】【。】【那】【是】【谁】【呢】【?】【几】【十】【道】【眼】【光】【像】【是】【几】【十】【盏】【探】【照】【灯】【,】【四】【处】【扫】【视】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【我】【的】【眼】【光】【一】【遇】【到】【身】【旁】【的】【程】【铭】【时】【,】【我】【就】【像】【得】【到】【宝】【贝】【似】【的】【心】【头】【一】【热】【,】【脱】【口】【而】【出】【:】【“】【是】【程】【铭】【!】【”】【在】【座】【的】【人】【异】【口】【同】【声】【欢】【呼】【:】【“】【对】【!】【是】【程】【铭】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【笑】【声】【、】【掌】【声】【久】【久】【不】【息】【,】【程】【铭】【难】【为】【情】【地】【涨】【红】【了】【脸】【,】【而】【我】【因】【为】【是】【第】【一】【个】【说】【对】【的】【,】【所】【以】【得】【到】【了】【两】【颗】【糖】【的】【奖】【励】【。】【这】【真】【是】【在】【甜】【甜】【蜜】【蜜】【、】【欢】【声】【笑】【语】【中】【长】【知】【识】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【修】【改】【后】【的】【文】【章】【抓】【住】【了】【一】【些】【关】【键】【性】【的】【细】【节】【,】【重】【点】【突】【出】【,】【具】【体】【形】【象】【,】【写】【得】【有】【声】【有】【色】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【说】【说】【写】【景】【状】【物】【。】【要】【写】【出】【景】【和】【物】【的】【具】【体】【形】【象】【,】【主】【要】【靠】【描】【写】【手】【段】【的】【运】【用】【。】【比】【如】【说】【,】【这】【个】【地】【方】【很】【美】【,】【究】【竟】【美】【在】【哪】【里】【?】【是】【亭】【台】【楼】【阁】【美】【,】【还】【是】【花】【草】【树】【木】【美】【?】【是】【绿】【水】【青】【山】【美】【,】【还】【是】【名】【胜】【古】【迹】【美】【?】【景】【物】【中】【有】【代】【表】【性】【的】【是】【哪】【些】【?】【它】【们】【有】【什】【么】【特】【征】【?】【如】【果】【能】【把】【重】【点】【景】【物】【的】【特】【征】【、】【状】【态】【描】【写】【出】【来】【,】【文】【章】【就】【会】【具】【体】【生】【动】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【个】【同】【学】【写】【《】【狮】【子】【林】【》】【,】【初】【稿】【是】【这】【样】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【起】【假】【山】【,】【便】【想】【起】【了】【狮】【子】【林】【,】【狮】【子】【林】【里】【那】【些】【天】【然】【岩】【石】【构】【成】【的】【狮】【子】【的】【神】【情】【姿】【态】【,】【极】【为】【逼】【真】【,】【一】【个】【个】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【。】【更】【妙】【的】【是】【,】【在】【山】【底】【或】【山】【腰】【,】【一】【个】【洞】【连】【着】【一】【个】【洞】【,】【层】【层】【叠】【叠】【,】【人】【们】【钻】【来】【穿】【去】【,】【妙】【趣】【横】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【后】【来】【,】【在】【老】【师】【的】【指】【导】【下】【,】【他】【对】【初】【稿】【进】【行】【了】【修】【改】【,】【增】【加】【了】【具】【体】【生】【动】【的】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【基】【本】【上】【描】【绘】【出】【狮】【子】【林】【的】【特】【色】【,】【给】【人】【以】【身】【临】【其】【境】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【全】【文】【如】【下】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【说】【起】【假】【山】【,】【便】【想】【起】【了】【狮】【子】【林】【。】【狮】【子】【林】【里】【那】【天】【然】【岩】【石】【构】【成】【的】【狮】【子】【的】【神】【情】【姿】【态】【,】【极】【为】【逼】【真】【。】【有】【的】【龇】【牙】【咧】【嘴】【,】【昂】【首】【长】【啸】【;】【有】【的】【瞪】【着】【两】【眼】【,】【威】【风】【凛】【凛】【;】【有】【的】【闭】【目】【养】【神】【,】【无】【精】【打】【采】【…】【…】【真】【是】【千】【姿】【百】【态】【,】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【。】【它】【们】【组】【成】【一】【个】【个】【高】【耸】【的】【假】【山】【。】【从】【山】【脚】【到】【山】【顶】【沿】【路】【怪】【石】【嶙】【峋】【,】【迂】【回】【曲】【折】【。】【有】【时】【看】【得】【见】【山】【顶】【上】【的】【游】【客】【的】【眉】【目】【,】【也】【听】【得】【见】【他】【们】【的】【谈】【笑】【,】【可】【就】【是】【没】【法】【登】【山】【。】【等】【到】【你】【好】【不】【容】【易】【登】【上】【山】【巅】【,】【才】【会】【发】【现】【,】【竟】【有】【好】【几】【条】【石】【路】【可】【达】【山】【顶】【。】【更】【妙】【的】【是】【,】【在】【山】【底】【或】【山】【腰】【,】【一】【个】【洞】【连】【着】【一】【个】【洞】【,】【层】【层】【叠】【叠】【,】【人】【们】【钻】【来】【穿】【去】【,】【妙】【趣】【横】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【细】【节】【描】【写】【是】【指】【抓】【住】【生】【活】【中】【细】【微】【而】【又】【具】【体】【的】【典】【型】【情】【节】【,】【加】【以】【生】【动】【细】【致】【的】【描】【绘】【,】【它】【具】【体】【渗】【透】【在】【对】【人】【物】【、】【景】【物】【或】【场】【面】【描】【写】【之】【中】【。】【正】【确】【运】【用】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【对】【表】【现】【人】【物】【、】【记】【叙】【事】【件】【、】【再】【现】【环】【境】【有】【着】【极】【其】【重】【要】【的】【作】【用】【。】【细】【节】【描】【写】【运】【用】【得】【好】【,】【做】【到】【写】【人】【则】【如】【见】【其】【人】【,】【写】【景】【则】【如】【临】【其】【境】【,】【文】【章】【就】【能】【形】【象】【鲜】【明】【,】【更】【具】【感】【染】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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